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My First Gun
My First Gun
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thellamamaster

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Echos from time
Echos from time

            

Echos from time
Description: Bryce 7.1 Pro,
AA set at 144, DOF,Soft Shadows

Rendered on my laptop
Added by: STKydd
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Date: 12.14.2012 18:17
Hits: 3148
Downloads: 69
Rating: 5.00 (2 Vote(s))
File size: 96.1 KB
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davidbrinnen
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Join Date: 01.03.2004
Comments: 2227
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Excellent render Stephen! The rotten wood and light rays look fantastic. The DOF is perhaps making the boat appear more like a model, if you want to use DOF then it might help to have a subject closer to the camera that is the focus of the scene or to use somewhat less of the effect.
12.15.2012 10:10 Offline davidbrinnen mail at davidbrinnen.co.uk http://www.davidbrinnen.com
Horo
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Join Date: 05.26.2004
Comments: 4617
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Excellent render indeed and very nice composition and colours. It could only be improved if DOF was removed. Full marks nevertheless.
12.16.2012 19:55 Offline Horo h.-r.h.wernli at bluewin.ch https://www.horo.ch/
STKydd
Member

Join Date: 03.01.2011
Comments: 238
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Thank you both, the DOF was intended to cover up where the sky meets the water on the horizon, it just did not seem right to me, after looking back at my set up, i had the DOF set to the light beams instead of the boat, DOF is one of those things i need to work more with to get the hang of it, Thanks
12.20.2012 13:56 Offline STKydd dragonsbain at yahoo.com
richter
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Join Date: 04.15.2004
Comments: 1097
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I can really sense the atmosphere. Nice evening colors, nice choice of wood for the boat. To me the dof works very good with the only qualm of having portion of the sky in focus - that isn't right. Being much farther away from camera, the sky ought to also be blurred by the dof. I believe you have a 2D flat cloud layer which is not scaled properly and is too near to the camera. Obviously that is easy to fix by rescaling and moving. Good work nontheless.
12.27.2012 18:51 Offline richter richter at cold-may.com
STKydd
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Join Date: 03.01.2011
Comments: 238
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Thanks Richter, yes you are correct i did use a 2D flat cloud layer and it is very close to everything, i did not notice at the time that the sky id not contain the DOF.
12.28.2012 22:31 Offline STKydd dragonsbain at yahoo.com
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