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The Point
Description:	Created using Bryce6.3
Added by:	Rebel64
Keywords:	Landscapes
Date:	05.17.2012 15:20
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slepalex
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Join Date: 10.15.2010
Comments: 881

Excellent composition. It is constructed organically and almost faultlessly.
However, I dare to make one essential remark which concerns the construction of the frame. The bottom quarter of the image needs to be cut off! Too much water! Photographers and artists have a rule: the line of the horizon should be approximately on 1/3 or on 2/3 heights of a shot. In this case it is necessary to lower the horizon line below, to give more sky and less water. And more! It is not necessary, that proportions of the monitor (4:3) dictated you a shot format. In this case it will be better to make proportions 16:9 or 16:10.

05.19.2012 15:16

slepalex
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Join Date: 10.15.2010
Comments: 881

Forgot to ask: clouds it is a photo?

05.19.2012 15:19

davidbrinnen
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Join Date: 01.03.2004
Comments: 2224

Yes I agree with Alex regarding the composition, a good image that could benefit from cropping.

05.19.2012 15:50

rashadcarter1
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Join Date: 06.04.2006
Comments: 2610

The water could be justified with a focus of some sort, perhaps a boat. Maybe you should have combined the two most recent uploads into a single one.

The water looks great. but there is a lack of haze in the scene which makes the items appear somewhat miniature.

05.20.2012 08:20

Horo
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Join Date: 05.26.2004
Comments: 4721

My main point is that the transition from the horizon to the sky is a bit harsh. I'm quite convinced that the sky is a photograph. It is not always simple to match the two.

05.21.2012 11:57

Rebel64
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Join Date: 03.21.2009
Comments: 183

Thanks guys. I haven't created anything for awhile and forgot a few of the simpleness of rules. Also have a problem with my power supply unit, have to buy a new one. The current one won't render the scenes without crashing the computer, so I ended up deleting a few things.

05.26.2012 18:25

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