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ghostdog15

05.09.2010, 18:38

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'Welcome to Haven'

'Welcome to Haven'
Description:	Peter Sage from the website 'Science Fiction Freedom' asked me to make a picture and this is what I came up with. Still might do some finishing touches. Comments and suggestions welcome. Thanks! Bigger version here: http://connorz16.deviantart.com/#/d2v7sgh
Keywords:	welcome, to, haven, city
Date:	07.30.2010 15:34
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Added by:	connorzelinsky

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Horo
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Join Date: 05.26.2004
Comments: 2970

Congratulations! Very nice scene. Every part looked at isolated look very good. The entrance to Haven looks correctly sized for everything outside the city. But it appears too large for the city under the bubble. The city, though is excellent. Apart from my quiobbles, this is really looking SciFi. Hope it gets accepted.

08.01.2010 13:44

connorzelinsky
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Join Date: 03.29.2007
Comments: 377

Thank you! I do agree with the problem of how big the doors are, however I wanted them big enough for transport trucks/ ships to get in. I might redo it later with a smaller door.

08.01.2010 16:52

Horo
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Join Date: 05.26.2004
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It's not the door, it's how the door intefaces with the city. You could add a long corridor to the city. Perhaps if the buildings in the city were not that close to the bubbles edge. I dunno. In fact, I struggle with these size issues more often than not.

08.02.2010 02:51

rashadcarter1
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Join Date: 06.04.2006
Comments: 1914

Interesting piece! I find the anti-gravity effect on the humans to be very well done, Bravo! To some degree, the crabs look a bit heavy, so the humans and the crabs are somewhat at odds. Are there magnets or something providing the attraction for those vehicles?

Lighting is excellent. Dim, and clear, very much like being in outer space. The star backdrop could have been a bit brighter and higher quality, but as is I get the idea well enough. Nice material on the Dome by the way, love the way it changes color.

Overall, the story told here is very effective.

08.09.2010 20:26

connorzelinsky
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Join Date: 03.29.2007
Comments: 377

Thank you! I agree with you on the stars, they are a bit dim, however the bigger version the stars are more visible. And the walkers, I was thinking that they had magnets or someway of staying on the ground.

08.15.2010 18:46

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