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Hallway
Hallway

            

Hallway
Description: Bob Bello on Sci-Fi Almanac asked me to do a picture for a story he is writing. This is what I have so far. Took the hallway I made a while ago and added some modern soldiers instead of replicator bugs.
I raised the lights on the wall so the are just above the lines instead of over them. I also framed the door in a black medal and remodeled the lever. Comments and suggestions are welcome. Thank you.
Added by: connorzelinsky
Keywords: hallway, modern, soldier
Date: 06.29.2010 04:31
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rashadcarter1
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Join Date: 06.04.2006
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Looking good Connor! I find the scene to be very plausible generally. There is an oddity in that it seems he has his gun drawn but it is pointing at nothing, just the wall from what I can tell.
06.29.2010 16:03 Offline rashadcarter1 rashadcarter1 at aol.com
connorzelinsky
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Join Date: 03.30.2007
Comments: 394
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Thanks! Ya, I spent a long time on that pose, and I really wanted to use it, but you are probably correct. He could just be jumpy, exploring somewhere and turned to talk to is buddy.....
06.29.2010 16:35 Offline connorzelinsky connorz16 at gmail.com
Popgriffon
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Join Date: 03.10.2005
Comments: 59
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My suggestions:
-Add visible lightcones to gun barrels to act as "Tactical flashlights"
- make some sophisticated-looking panels with terrain editor and plant them on the walls and ceiling.
-make some dirt&rubble with terrains and plant them in the wall/floor corner
-turn ceiling lights into visible lightcones, and reduce range of wall lights to some 1-2 metres
...And give them bigger guns ;)
06.30.2010 23:16 Offline Popgriffon poplowicki at pro.onet.pl
Horo
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Join Date: 05.26.2004
Comments: 4721
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So far so good. The lighting doesn't convince me here. The pose of the soldier coming from the dark is very good looking. The other one, however, looks wrong. The corridor is empty, no need to hold the gun that way and particularly not pointing it in the general direction of his buddy.
07.01.2010 09:17 Offline Horo h.-r.h.wernli at bluewin.ch https://www.horo.ch/


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