I like the overall composition on the previous one more (personal taste). Here, I like that the sky is almost hidden and the foliage on the trees look more natural to me - though disclosing Bryce's angular branches. A bit less bump on the water would probably be an advantage. But there's nothing wrong with the water as such. Just an idea because we seem to be closer to it than on the previous camera angle. Great piece of work all the same. No real qualms, just nagging a bit.
Join Date: 10.22.2008 Comments: 394
Join Date: 10.21.2008 Comments: 113
Love this one too but there's something about the previous image that appeals to me more, think it's mainly the angle perhaps - can't quite put my finger on it.
Join Date: 07.31.2008 Comments: 328
Rashad I love your images! This is great! The only thing i wish is a bit of stones under the water and near the bank.
Join Date: 06.04.2006 Comments: 2622
More stones underwater is something I too think would have helped the piece along. I also have some other things in the works. For some reason, this file is exceedingly slow to navigate, so I need to find some way to get those stones in there.
Thanks everyone for the feedback, I really appreciate it. More to come.