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AAU Mirae into outer space
AAU Mirae into outer space

            

AAU Mirae into outer space
Description: The big ship is all mine, modeled wuth LW modeler, then imported and textured in Bryce. Backdrop is somewhat just Photoshop enjoyment
Added by: zorzim
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Date: 07.28.2009 22:40
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Rating: 4.50 (2 Vote(s))
File size: 146.1 KB
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rashadcarter1
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Join Date: 06.04.2006
Comments: 2610
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Multiple stars, very awesome. Love the details and the feeling of movement. Great modeling. This looks like it could be a scene from a movie I think the distant stars are a tad too bright, or maybe too large. but that is me just reaching for a criticsm. Very Very nice!!!!
07.28.2009 23:36 Offline rashadcarter1 rashadcarter1 at aol.com
connorzelinsky
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Join Date: 03.30.2007
Comments: 394
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Very nice scene. The ship models are pretty sweet. Is the long flat one a Hiigaran Battle-cruiser from Homeworld?
07.29.2009 03:42 Offline connorzelinsky connorz16 at gmail.com
Horo
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Join Date: 05.26.2004
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Great model - well done, nicely textured. I think this scene is a bit busy but it could very well go for a cover of a SciFi novel. Keep it up.
07.29.2009 18:28 Offline Horo h.-r.h.wernli at bluewin.ch https://www.horo.ch/
richter
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Join Date: 04.15.2004
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I can echo Horo about the setup being on the busy side or at least you should have given your ships some more "space" around them when rendering, not cutting through the ships this way. Of course, I agree that this is the artist's choice and gives the illusion of more aircrafts coming. The big ship is very nice indeed, but the rather small image size prevents us from seeing the texturing work and some of the smaller details. A very important thing is to keep the scale size right, or at least visually right for the image. The shadow edges on the planets make them look smaller then they should be, but if they actually are big enough, when lit by a source so dangerously near in the sense of cosmic proportions, the given star or a sun will literally melt down the planets. That is only judging by how those are lit. You should strive for smoother transition between lit and shaded areas. And whether the planets obey the light coming from the two bright sources in background or not is another question.

On the compositional side there is nothing but compliments for you, Zorzim. The camera's angle of view, the invasive formation of the ships, color choices and modeling work I do really like! Good work there!
07.31.2009 14:17 Offline richter richter at cold-may.com


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