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A canyon somewhere anaglyph
A canyon somewhere anaglyph
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davidbrinnen

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Down the Old Mississippi
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Down the Old Mississippi
Description: Worked for 4 days on just the "water". The color is right for the Miss., but I couldn't get the "waves" right and I tried a lot of different mats. Now, before anybody says anything about the being too close to the water, this is Wisconsin and we do it like that, we drive on the ice in Winter, etc. The girl is flirting with the guy, lol.
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Date: 05.13.2009 19:33
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rashadcarter1
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Join Date: 06.04.2006
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Good. Scaling in generally improving in your scene however I think we could still fix a few things. The canoe seems small to support a human in the water.

Flirtation is always welcome, he too is not standing next to a shiny car for no reason. Bling works.

The water is most excelelnt. You only need to increase the requency of the water. Transparency is also key at this shallow depth.

The exhaust from the boat might be made dirtier unless it is a steamboat. I think you might investigate as I have using a cloud like this one for the sky. There is an option in the material lab to integrate vvolumetics with the sky, which will give a low cloud the appearance of great height.

I really like you eye for detail!
05.14.2009 01:07 Offline rashadcarter1 rashadcarter1 at aol.com
Horo
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Join Date: 05.26.2004
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This is a typical "Rebel". It's your style. I could say it's from you without looking.

The waves and wakes from the two boats in the middle of the river and from the steamboat are absolutely outstanding. Your scenes are very detailed, there's a lot to look at.
05.14.2009 10:54 Offline Horo h.-r.h.wernli at bluewin.ch https://www.horo.ch/
Rebel64
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Join Date: 03.21.2009
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Darn, I was focusing on everything else and didn't look hard enough at the rowboat. I agree rashadcarter. Yup, the smoke on the old paddlewheel should have been darker and spread out more.
Lol, thank you Horo
05.16.2009 15:26 Offline Rebel64


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