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Home Land
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Home Land
Description: They are on their way to their alien Dessert Home land

Here's a 2nd Version Cropped
http://archclan.deviantart.com/art/Home-land-v2-98267182
Added by: archclan
Keywords: alien, dessert, home, land
Date: 09.18.2008 06:20
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File size: 258.1 KB
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Horo
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Join Date: 05.26.2004
Comments: 4721
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Nice desert scene. The models might be smoothed a bit further. I think you made something very nice but we have a problem with the size of things and the camera angle. Though I like the detail of the Jeep, it isn't compatible with the nearest aircraft which wings appear to nearly strike the sand. An option would be to get rid of a couple of the very beautiful flying models and perhaps zoom in to the towers. It just looks a bit crowded. I also like the cactus but their size appears to be not fitting. Either they are gigantic or the spacecrafts are very small.
09.18.2008 18:40 Offline Horo h.-r.h.wernli at bluewin.ch https://www.horo.ch/
rashadcarter1
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Join Date: 06.04.2006
Comments: 2610
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Not surprising I find myself in full agreement with Horo. You have doen everything correctly here. I like the haze and the low sun and the stong coloring, all excellent. Scaleing, though, is a big problem here.

Scaling is one of the most important considerations as artist must make. Physically it is necessary, and artistically it is significant because the "empasis makes the song." Scale can tell us what is important and what is secondary. It is essentail.
09.18.2008 19:33 Offline rashadcarter1 rashadcarter1 at aol.com
archclan
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Join Date: 08.01.2008
Comments: 242
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Your right I have to Move them and Delete some of the objects and Scale them Properly This was a quick one since my 2 computers are going Crazy again
09.18.2008 20:16 Offline archclan arch_devol at yahoo.com http://www.archclan.deviantart.com
connorzelinsky
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Join Date: 03.30.2007
Comments: 394
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I like it and I agree with the other comments But I have another idea. Select all of the ships and move them up. This would allow you to keep all of your ships and make it look more natural (ships usually fly high). You might have to also move the camera so you can still see them. This is what I do for most of my pictures. Make the ship really far away from the ground. Really nice ships. I like the one in the upper right
09.18.2008 23:13 Offline connorzelinsky connorz16 at gmail.com


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