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Mothership with fighters
Mothership with fighters

            

Mothership with fighters
Description: Ships flying off to who knows where. Comments/ suggestions needed.
Added by: connorzelinsky
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Date: 07.11.2007 13:23
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tina gazcon
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Join Date: 08.07.2006
Comments: 254
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Cool ship! Why is there a shadow underneath the ships? Are you right over clouds?
07.11.2007 14:27 Offline tina gazcon pecasg62 at hotmail.com
Horo
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Join Date: 05.26.2004
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Very nice model. The environment needs a bit of additional attention. The sky and - as Tina's sharp eye has discovered - the shadow on the ground plane. There could be a shadow on clouds, but than they shouldn't be so flat.
07.11.2007 18:10 Offline Horo h.-r.h.wernli at bluewin.ch https://www.horo.ch/
gat
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Join Date: 12.21.2006
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maybe change it to a space scene? good models, need some material improvement
07.11.2007 18:51 Offline gat brshkv at yahoo.com
connorzelinsky
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Join Date: 03.30.2007
Comments: 394
Its not sky.

The bottom is water not sky. It is just reflecting a lot more than it should
07.12.2007 00:19 Offline connorzelinsky connorz16 at gmail.com
richter
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Join Date: 04.15.2004
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I almost feel like the environment is motion blurred. Which is good, because the sense of speed I believe is of great importance here. Good use of textures, both on the ships and the glass. Maybe you used the water material from the glass library, not from the water planes lib. You need at least a couple of ripples here and there to break-up that shadow a little bit. This shadow is not a bad thing, it is just not so real to appear in that way. The white traces from behind the engines are nice touch.
07.12.2007 07:59 Offline richter richter at cold-may.com
davidbrinnen
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Join Date: 01.03.2004
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I like the ship and the formations, has a very 1960's SF book cover feel to it. Maybe that's because I have a lot on my bookshelves looking back at me. I'd suggest either focusing on the model more or adding something to the background, it seems a little bit empty as it stands.
07.14.2007 21:05 Offline davidbrinnen mail at davidbrinnen.co.uk http://www.davidbrinnen.com
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