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Description: I try to make nice night picture but it look like that I make some mistake. Anyway, it should be romantic evening.
Added by: vmaks
Keywords: night, love, men, women
Date: 02.14.2007 22:41
Hits: 3470
Downloads: 107
Rating: 0.00 (0 Vote(s))
File size: 220.1 KB

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Caption writer: free picture
Byline: vmaks - www.landavia.com
Object name: Free picture
Keywords: bryce picture
Copyright Notice: http://www.landavia.com
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Horo
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Join Date: 05.26.2004
Comments: 4721
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The pose of the characters on the park bench look convincing. It appears that the feet of them are burried in the ground. The tree is nice, too. I miss something in the background, skyscrapers, distant mountains, anything. The light is not convincing. Judging from the shadows, the main light is positiond right overhead. This is a good start, but could be much improved upon.
02.15.2007 16:42 Offline Horo h.-r.h.wernli at bluewin.ch https://www.horo.ch/
rashadcarter1
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Join Date: 06.04.2006
Comments: 2610
agreed

There are alot of things going right in this scene. I really like the message of this scene. It is simple, private, and honest. That moon really is a sight to behold.

Horo hits the nail on the head with the follow through aspect. The horizon begs to be made more specific with something. Horo's point in lighting also seems quite valid. Perhaps assuming that the moon itself would be the brightest object and the primary source of any illumination in the scene would help steer you to a different lighting arrangement. A brighter whiter looking moon would appear capable of illuminating the world below to a high enough level. It would also change the direction that the shadows fall in the scene. I would disable sky dome if you want realism.

I think this scene is great and is worth an extra second or two of follow through.
02.15.2007 22:57 Offline rashadcarter1 rashadcarter1 at aol.com


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