I like it. I think you've done a great job with a rather challenging technical issue, haze. I think the scene is slightly too bright. The fog would not be so bright white but would be gray. The color of the walkway is also rather bright, a bit too clean to be outdoors. Stunning trees. Unusual reflection going on with the grass. Cool atmospheric scene.
Join Date: 01.03.2004 Comments: 2227
As per usual you seem to have a knack for interesting and challenging subjects. Appart from echoing Rashads comments, which seem wise and pertinent. I would point out that maybe since the haze is so central to this peice it might be an idea to utilise a patchy volumentric fog as opposed to the rather uniform fog featured here.
Join Date: 05.26.2004 Comments: 4476
I agree with Rashad about the brightness of this picture and I do not agree with David about the fog patches. I like it very much this way, if it only were less bright. The ground the park banks stand on appears to be very wet - I don't perceive it as grass but rather flat. David is right about the subjects you chose to work with, interesting, not the easiest ones, and you are quite good at it.